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134117 No. 134117
Hey there. Some anon from /v/ here, interested in making a story with a protagonist from some other vidya game. Not so good with introductions, so let's just get started already.





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Welcome.
Please select your Player Character.
[] Issac Clarke
[] Dante
[] Ezio Auditore
[] Frank West

Select starting location:
[] Hakurei Shrine
[] Forest of Magic
[] Bamboo Forest
[] Eientei
[] Scarlet Devil Mansion
-[] Inside
-[] Outside
[] Human Village
[] Yuuka's Flower Field
[] Underground

How will the character be sent to Gensokyo?
[] Yukari's meddling
[] Event caused in the MC's universe

A title will be given once the character is
chosen.
Character suggestions are welcome (that is, if I'm familiar with them).
Thoughts and criticisms are welcome.

>> No. 134118
This won't end well.
>> No. 134119
>>134118
OP here. I understand your concern. But this idea's been floating around my head for a while now.
If it ends up being a piece of shit, then meh, I'll give it up and either come up with something more original, or just continue reading other people's CYOA's. More likely the latter.
>> No. 134120
>>134117
My god, what the fuck have I done? Should I quit, or just try to make up for the shitty intro?
>> No. 134121
>anon from /v/ here

You should be familiar with this, in that case.
NOPE.jpg

I'll be fair, though, and actually vote instead of instantly shitting all over this.

[x]Emil Castagnier
[x]Palanquin ship
[x]I don't care.
>> No. 134122
>>134121
Sorry bro. Only played the first one.
>> No. 134123
>>134122
In that case.
[x]Godhand Gene
>> No. 134124
>>134123
Counted. Thank you for giving me a chance. I'll do my best I guess.
>> No. 134125
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134125
[x] Rance
[x] Yuuka's Flower Field
[x] Event in the MC's universe

You know you want this.
>> No. 134127
[x] Rance
[x] Yuuka's Flower Field
[x] Event in the MC's universe

Oh, god. The Rance rampage. I want this now.
>> No. 134128
[x] Rance
[x] Yuuka's Flower Field
[x] Event in the MC's universe
Always bet on Rance.
>> No. 134129
>>134125
>>134127
>>134128
...looks like I have to download that game again. And play through it AGAIN. Fuck. I guess it'll be worth it. If it wins, that is.
>> No. 134131
[x] Rance
[x] Forest of Magic
[x] Event in the MC's universe

Because I want to get some mileage out of Rance here.
>> No. 134132
>>134129
That reminds me, I'm no good at writing H-scenes. Should I try anyway if Rance wins? Because I know, Rance in a fic without sex just wouldn't work.
>> No. 134133
>>134132
I wouldn't bother. There's about a 0% chance this story will be even halfway decent with Rance as the protagonist.
>> No. 134134
>>134132
You don't need to make the character like him. Just take the name and let Anon decide how the character is going to act.
If else it just feels like a crossover,
>Issac Clarke
>Dante
just try to create something of your own.
>> No. 134135
>>134132

Do what you must.
>> No. 134136
As an aside, after voting and all that shit is done, you should probably delete this thread and start it over in /others/. That's generally where crossover stories go. And I am hoping to god that we avoid the massive amount of retards who solely lurk /th/
>> No. 134137
>>134133
I realized how bad it looked.
>>134134
I saw it was done on here before, it didn't look to bad. But to be fair, the MC was suffering from amneisa, so he was basically a blank slate. I'll go along with your idea. It'll make things go much smoother.
>> No. 134138
>>134137
>I realized how bad it looked.
You misunderstand. I am saying the story will be bad because Rance is the protagonist. Not only do I hold little hope that you would be able to write him decently, but because he is Rance, the full-retard brigade would leap upon this story and make it terrible.

To put it simply, with Rance as a protagonist, I envision a multitude of people on par with Random Anon reading and voting. It's not a heartening thought.
>> No. 134139
>>134138
Oh, sorry. But yeah, I understand what you're saying. Guess I'll keep Rance off the list.
>> No. 134140
>>134139
No, no, that wouldn't be fair to them. In all honesty, just write people who you are comfortable writing, and think you can do justice. If you can write Rance as the horrific manchild that he is, than go ahead, and don't let my whining hold you back.
>> No. 134141
>>134140
Alright then. But to be honest, I highly doubt I could pull off Rance, unless he was an antagonist. I'm not exactly fond of his character.
>> No. 134142
Alright, going to sleep (not that anyone cares). I'll check on the votes later on.
>> No. 134145
[x] Rance
[x] Yuuka's Flower Field
[x] Event in the MC's universe
>> No. 134148
>Rance
Christ, you people are boring. Why does this always happen?

[x] Francis York Morgan
[x] Human Village
[x] Shenanigans
>> No. 134149
>>134148

[X] That.
>> No. 134153
[x] Issac Clarke
[x] Human Village
[x] Event caused in the MC's universe

Goddamn Marker. Just to see Issac "And not a single fuck was given" Clarke face the insanity of Gensokyo... and shrug before stomping some faces in.
>> No. 134154
>Francis York Morgan

It's funny how the only good thing about him was his character and the story involved where as everything else was sort of a train wreck.

That said...

[x] Francis York Morgan
-[x] Yuuka's Flower Field
--[x] Shenanigans

"WHY YOU DO THIS YUUKA!?"
>> No. 134156
[x] Sheogorath
[x] Scarlet Devil Mansion
-[] Inside
[x] Shenanigans
>> No. 134157
[x] Isaac Clarke
[x] Human Village
[x] Event caused in the MC's universe
>> No. 134158
[x] Isaac Clarke
[x] Human Village
[x] Event caused in the MC's universe
>> No. 134159
[x] Issac Clarke
[x] Human Village
[x] Event caused in the MC's universe
>> No. 134160
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134160
[X] Saxton Hale
[X] Hakurei Shrine
[X] Yukari's meddling.

BECAUSE IT WORKED SO WELL THE FIRST TIME!

sarcasm...

Good lord...
>> No. 134161
[x] Isaac Clarke
[x] Human Village
[x] Event caused in the MC's universe

Dead Space time. Because I play it at night like a MAN.
>> No. 134162
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134162
>>134157
>>134158
>>134159
>>134161
>>134153
>> No. 134163
For fuck's sake, people.
>> No. 134165
[x] Isaac Clarke
[x] Human Village
[x] Event caused in the MC's universe
>> No. 134171
Fuck stop with the same-fagging already. I would like to use Issac as the MC too, but only if it's done fairly. So stop doing that shit.
>> No. 134172
Several more votes, then I'll call it.
>> No. 134174
[x] Francis York Morgan
-[x] Underground
-[x] Shenanigans

Would have voted for Isaac but it feels too soon after finishing a DS1+2 run on Impossible/hardcore modes
>> No. 134175
>>134174
I just decided to add Issac Clarke because I came up with a twist with his encounter with the Marker in DS2. I liked the sound of it, so yeah.
>> No. 134179
[x] Francis York Morgan
[x] Human Village
[x] Shenanigans
>> No. 134183
I hope that everyone realizes that Issac is probably gonna start building the tools to build the tools (to build the tools to etc.) approximatively 1 to 2 days after arrival. He is an engineering genius (IIRC) and has a headful of brilliant ideas to kill the inhuman. That said, Issac isn't all that broken for Gensokyo, considering his limitations as a human being.

Now, something like Alex Mercer/ZEUS would be an entirely different problem. A sentient supervirus with the mind of a genius geneticist/microbiologist (and several others hundreds/thousands of minds, from doctors to Marines and Blackwatch), super strength and agility, gliding capabilities, capable of genetic recoding and re-differentiation on the fly and imitating a consumed victim perfectly. Even in Gensokyo, he's a security nightmare and, if he so wishes, a walking generator of plagues that would have Eirin stumped. Of course, the REDLIGHT virus (DX-1118 A and C) is basically the GameShark of DNA and BLACKLIGHT (untyped DX-1118 variant) is even worst, mostly because it adapts at a speed which is frankly ridiculous, observe the growing immunity to BLOODTOX appearing in days after initial exposure, and it basically created a Shoggoth Lord out of a single human body.
>> No. 134185
>>134183
Actually, from what I recall from backstory Isaac's career as a low level engineer was stagnating at the time of DS1.
Though he is able to use the high level suits which are restricted to personnel with the required rank. Either the system just doesn't care at that point, or he wasn't issued one because they weren't expecting problems.

And the reason I same-fagged is because there's no vote for Youkai Mountain. I wanted to impress the Kappa with fancy armor and gadgets.
>> No. 134187
Well I know I don't have much of a chance but...

[x] Gene (God Hand)
[x] Hakurei Shrine
[x] Event in MC's universe.

You can find various cut scenes on youtube from the game.

I expect Gene to go "damn it, not again" when he realizes what kind of personality Reimu has. But who knows he might win her over somehow.
>> No. 134188
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134188
[X] Kratos
[X] Yuuka's Flower Field
[X] Event caused in the MC's universe involving Yukari's meddling
>> No. 134193
[x] Isaac Clarke
[x] Human Village
[x] Event caused in the MC's universe
>> No. 134198
Alright, looks like the MC will be either Issac or York. Choose one.
[ ] Issac Clarke
[ ] Francis York Morgan
>> No. 134199
[x] Isaac Clarke

This sounds best.
>> No. 134201
[ ] Issac Clarke
>> No. 134202
[x] Isaac Clarke

Just to let you know Iisaac is spelled with 2 a's
>> No. 134203
>>134202
Yeah, I have a habit of misspelling his name. I'll be aware of it in the future.
Anyways, sorry to the guys who wanted York, because it looks like Isaac is the MC.
But first, before we begin, advantages and disadvantages.

Advantages
- has access to some of his arsenal at the beginning
- physically strong
- is able to jury-rig items to fulfill his needs

Disadvantages
- prone to hallucinations that may lead to the harming of another person or himself
- his habit of swearing may lower the disposition of some people

Equipment
- [ ] specify which R.I.G. he'll use
- Plasma Cutter (default)
- [ ] name three other weapons
- kinesis module
- stasis module
- x2 small med-kit(s)
- x1 medium med-kit(s)
- x3 stasis pack(s)

Tell me if I'm missing anything.
>> No. 134204
>>134136
Late reply.
But even if did that, if they saw this, wouldn't they just go over to /others/ anyway?
>> No. 134208
I don't know if this still counts butttt

[x] Sackboy in one of his many forms.
[x] Scarlet Devil Mansion
-[X] Inside.
[x] Event in the MC's universe
>> No. 134209
>>134208
As much fun the idea sounds, I'm afraid you're a bit late with your vote. Maybe I'll use it some other time.
>> No. 134210
Elite Advanced R.I.G
- Plasma Cutter (default)
- Line Gun, Pulse Rifle, Javelin Gun
- kinesis module
- stasis module
- x2 small med-kit(s)
- x1 medium med-kit(s)
- x3 stasis pack(s)
>> No. 134212
Riot Security RIG
- Plasma Cutter
- none
- kinesis module
- stasis module
- x2 small med-kit(s)
- x1 medium med-kit(s)
- x3 stasis pack(s)

Plasma Cutter is all you will ever need.
>> No. 134213
>>134212
>Plasma Cutter is all you will ever need.
Your funeral pal.

Elite Advanced R.I.G
- Plasma Cutter (default)
- Force Gun, Pulse Rifle, and Ripper
- kinesis module
- stasis module
- x2 small med-kit(s)
- x1 medium med-kit(s)
- x3 stasis pack(s)
>> No. 134214
Riot Security RIG
- Plasma Cutter
- none
- kinesis module
- stasis module
- x2 small med-kit(s)
- x1 medium med-kit(s)
- x3 stasis pack(s)
>> No. 134215
[x]Plasma cutter
-[x] Kits
--[x] Packs

>>134204
Not necessarily. Many of the neckbeards who solely lurk /th/ don't pay attention to new threads until they get some popularity. It's a moot point anyways, since /others/ is really where this story belongs in the first place.
>> No. 134216
[x]Elite Advanced RIG
- Plasma Cutter
- Line Gun, Pulse Rifle, Javelin Gun
- kinesis module
- stasis module
- x2 small med-kit(s)
- x1 medium med-kit(s)
- x3 stasis pack(s)

Why go small when you can go for among the very best?

>>134215
Indeed, but newfags will be newfags.
>> No. 134217
[x]Elite Advanced RIG
- Plasma Cutter
- Line Gun, Pulse Rifle, Javelin Gun
- kinesis module
- stasis module
- x2 small med-kit(s)
- x1 medium med-kit(s)
- x3 stasis pack(s)
>> No. 134218
>>134213
I never used any other weapon in both games on all difficulties. As long as you have enough stasis it works perfect.

But aside from that. Will there ever be some kind of update? It still needs to be seen if OP is shit and needs to be taken care of or if he is at least a bit good.
>> No. 134219
>>134218
Yeah. I'll start a new thread in /others/ to begin the story. Just wait a bit and I'll have it ready, alright? Or before that, could you give me some tips so I don't end up fucking up the story?
>> No. 134221
>>134218
I'm on Chapter 11 in DS2. Should I re-spec my other weapons and commit the nodes to my Cutter and stasis?
>> No. 134223
>>134219
Just get that story posted already.
>> No. 134224
>>134223
Just be patient. I'm working on it.
>> No. 134226
>>134224
>>134223
>>134221
>>134219

Just start your story or rethink it, this helps no one.

Round these parts people don't take too kindly to authors voting in their own stories or talking to themselves in their threads by dropping their names. As an author you have absolute control over direction anyways, so why bother deceiving others? I very much doubt this story will amount to much but I hope to be proven wrong.

On a related topic: votespam is not tolerated on our site and even those who use proxies are caught by our moderation team. Respect your fellow readers and the authors.
>> No. 134232
>>134226
Sorry about that. I'll have it posted later on today. Just having trouble coming up with ways to introduce the character.